A Hershey kiss is a delicate drop of chocolate in the shape of a rain drop. Each kiss is individually wrapped with a as silver foil that is as shiny as a diamond. The chocolate is as smooth as a baby's bottom as it melts in your mouth. They truly are one of a kind kisses.
Short and truly sweet...nice description. I like your simile 'as smooth as a baby's bottom. You mae a couple of mistakes in your mechanics...
ReplyDeleteRaindrop is one word.
Capitalize the first letter of all important words in your title (A Drop of Deliciousness) and don't put a period after it.
One-of-a-kind is used as an adjective here so you need to hyphenate it.
I like the green underlined 'kiss' in the first sentence.